How come all your real-life relationship exciting, while your kissing scenes read therefore lame?
Once you had been the protagonist of relationship in actual life: Palpitations, edginess, Learjets… after all, butterflies in your belly. Or at the least windows that are steamy your eyes.
Shallow words, predictable actions, and empty shells of feelings.
Exactly why is that? And just how are you able to arrive at the center of the thing that makes a kissing scene exciting, and transfer that onto paper?